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Sal's Player Application - salamandermoss - 07-19-2024
Section 1: Player Information
1.What is your Minecraft Username: SalamanderMoss
2.Starfell is an ADULT-ONLY server. By playing on here you agree to follow all the rules and are expected to act accordingly. Have you read all the rules and agree to follow them to the best of your abilities?
Yepparoni (yes)
3.(Optional) What is your Discord username? SalamanderMoss (again)
Section 2: Roleplay Questions
1.In order to ensure fair and proper roleplay there are a few terms we’d like you to be aware of. For each term, define the term and give an example where it may apply:
- Metagaming:
Making use of knowledge that you are aware of, but your persona is unaware of, unable to understand, or hasn't been discovered or inferred.
- Powergaming:
Exceeding the capabilities of your persona in roleplay.
Section 3: Character Information
1.What is your character’s name, age, race, and gender?
Name -- In the common tongue, 'Silt'. In native tongue -- a series of two hisses, one one second, one a half-second, and a rising-toned bark.
Age -- Somewhere around her 30s.
Race -- Maoha Kobold
Gender -- Woman
2.In a few short sentences, please describe both your character’s physical appearance (Height, Hair Colour, Eye Colour, etc.) and their personality (ie. their temperament and core motivations).
A giant is she -- over 6ft feet surely though never stopping slouching enough to be measured right, mottled, brown skin with a slick slime coat. Silt, the Giant Salamander. With broad shoulders, a soft stomach, strong thick limbs and a wide tail, on land she is slow moving and poor sighted. But in water, she is quick, keen-nosed, and patient. She retains large gill slits near her jaw from her youth, partial metamorphasis similar to those Maoha who mirror the axolotl, but with no gills to speak of. Sensory cells line the tip of her tail to head, sensors of vibration in water -- short range, but a holdover from a part of her that was once an ambush predator.
Not entirely a 'gentle giant', nor shy despite her quietness, Silt is a patient, calm woman. On her mother's stretch of river, they kept themselves as freshwater crab herders. The construction of a dam upstream led to the loss of livestock and eventual dissolution of the farm, with Silt far into her 20s, and the dissolution of the family unit. This has left Silt independent, but of poor social skills to settle once more, now working as a physical labourer where possible, and with fewer skills to take trade elsewhere. It is little noticed how nervous she is at times, flat face revealing little. Often, she is lonely.
RE: Sal's Player Application - Beelzemier - 07-20-2024
Under Review
RE: Sal's Player Application - Beelzemier - 07-20-2024
Pending
Under review regarding corrections needed for racial traits of the Kobold species and examples needing to be provided. Thank you!
Under review regarding corrections needed for racial traits of the Kobold species and examples needing to be provided. Thank you!
Denied
Hi there, your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
- Your Metagaming definition is missing an example. Please provide one!
- Your Powergaming definition is a bit lacking and is missing an example. Please flesh this out and provide an example!
- Your racial description is missing an important descriptor of whether or not they are pure Maoha Kobold, mixed Kobold, as well as what type of Maoha Kobold.
- You characteristics description states there are sensory cells lining their full body, which could open up Powergaming such as avoiding sneak attacks, sensing items or creatures others cannot, or metagaming locations of other players in the vicinity. Please refer to the Kobold sensory determinants redlines and the Combat Roleplay guidelines regarding racial traits.
Please see
Combat Guidelines
Kobold Lore
- Your character description states above 6 feet tall, but does not specify an exact height of reference.
Feel free to contact me on discord @ [Beelzemier] if you need any assistance or have any questions! We look forward to seeing your future application!